There is humour in the air,
I still don’t get the joke,
I donot understand the pun,
Feels strangely humiliating,
Like all eyes staring at me,
All men laughing and mocking me.
I talked and they heard a bark,
The candle lights but its still dark,
I walked, rumour’s I hopped,
It’s grief but I haven’t sobbed,
Its offensive,but I ain’t defensive
Yet they slurred in combative.
The skin feels heavy on the bone,
It seems I’ve been thrown,
There’s no cloth,modest to be worn,
’cause they’d laugh like its all torn,
I ain’t a gemstone, it ain’t a combat zone,
Only a plum-pudding stone,so just let me alone.
Very good! I like poems that bring forward powerful images and emotions. Thank you!
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Thank you so much for reading my blog 😚
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Absolutely powerful! Thank you for this. And thank you for sharing your truth!
Please check out my latest blog and challenge for Bullying Prevention Month.
https://ladyhoodjourney.com/2017/09/25/you-bullied-me-challenge/
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Sure
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Lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you!! Glad you liked this
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Beautiful imagery 🙂
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it
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a powerful piece. amazing.
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Thank you so much
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🙂
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Your poem captures the subject well, that first verse particularly caught me as I’ve been in that position where you’re stuck in the middle of someone else’s joke, everyone is laughing but you can’t work out what exactly they’re laughing at despite being fairly certain it’s you. You worded it perfectly.
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Thank you so much😊
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Nice work!! 😊
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Nice but difficult for translation ☺
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Thank you😊
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Wow another piece of poetic art
Beautiful lines that will definitely touch the reader’s heart 💓
“I walked, rumour’s I hopped,
It’s grief but I haven’t sobbed,”
Beautiful and traits of a self made person
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Thanks but I am really curious if I know you
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Maybe; maybe not
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It doesnot make it any easier😊
Why the hidden identity btw?
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Identities, knowledge abt the person does not matter in the world of words
What matters is how each one of is express our feelings
So just consider me a friend 😁
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Well said.😊
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Like you said expressions matter, it’s always better to express explicitly the truth about perceptions. confusion, the hide and seek games, pranks, all of this are good as long as it does not make the other person insecure in her own skin. you never know what drives someone to his/her breaking point. we’re all humans afterll.
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Thank you 😄
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Very very deep and powerful poem! Love xx
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Thank you so much😊
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Hey Ira, this is such a nicely written deep poem. I really like your work, and hence I have nominated you for the versatile blogger award. I’m sure you’ll like it. You can check it out here:
https://theshininggem.wordpress.com/2017/07/28/the-versatile-blogger-award/
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Yeah I saw that. Thank you so much. Preaently I’m at work. I’ll definitely put a post once I get home. I am really thankful you thought I am worthy of the nomination. 😊
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Haha, that’s alright, I was just making sure you knew of the nomination, hence the comment.
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Thank you😊
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“The skin feels heavy on the bone,” wow!
Very powerful piece.
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Thank you so much😊
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Amazing
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked😊
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